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عبد الحميد مزيغي
09/04/2015, 05:10 PM
Fast food outlets offer meals that can be prepared quickly, customers can eat it in the shops or take it to the home.
It is true that fast food enables to gain some time, and away us from the trouble of preparing food, but the damages of fast foods are more than their benefits
People eat fast foods and they don't know all their components nor how it was -prepared
- eating quickly without chewing well and propably no seats, causing difficulty in digestion
- fast food contains a lot of fat, causing obesity, high cholesterol, desease such as cardiovacular, high blood pressure and diabetes
- no vegetables nor fruits used in fast foods
- family dispered because every one eats alone
And depsite all those damages of fast foods, people still eat it

مع شكري الجزيل مقدما ، اتمنى تقويم النص الانجليزي أعلاه ، لا أريد مستوى عالي في التعبير ، فقط أريد تصحيح الأخطاء اللغوية والعبارات الخاطئة
وإلى ذلك الحين دمتم في رعاية الله وحفظه

محمود عباس مسعود
09/04/2015, 07:22 PM
الأستاذ عبد الحميد مزيغي تحية طيبة

لقد قمت ببعض التعديلات والتصويبات على النص وحذفت جملة and propably no seats لعدم وضوح المعنى.

Fast food outlets offer meals that can be prepared quickly; customers can eat it either in the shops or take it home
It is true that fast food helps us gain some time and relieves us from the trouble of preparing food, but the harmful effects of fast foods outweigh their benefits
People eat fast foods without knowing all their ingredients, nor how they were prepared.
- Eating fast without chewing well … causes digestive problems
fast food contains a great amount of fat, causing obesity, high cholesterol, and other health issues, such as cardiovascular diseases, high blood pressure and diabetes
- Neither vegetables nor fruits are used in fast foods
- Family unity is disrupted because every one eats alone
And despite all the harfmful effects of fast foods, people still eat them

عبد الحميد مزيغي
11/04/2015, 02:31 AM
بارك الله فيك الأستاذ محمود عباس مسعود
استفدت من التصويبات التي وضعتها وسآخذها بعين الاعتبار إن شاء الله
شكرا جزيلا مرة أخرى